Story of the day! Episode 1- Mum, Omasiri and me by Okereke Best


When Papa travelled to the U.K I was still learning to be a boy, barely eleven. I could remember clearly what happened the day before Papa left Onitsha for Lagos; it was on a Saturday. Omasiri my elder sister and I returned from Bible class chanting ‘Brave soldier’, a song we learnt in church.

That evening was fun; it was unlike Saturday evenings.

Just like those evenings you spend with your loved ones on a visit, before they path the next morning. Chidiuto, our house help served nsala soup with pounded yam, a meal she seldom prepared or else Mama was pregnant or had just delivered.

‘You guys are sweet; very sweet, I just wish I could stay a little longer with you’, Papa said, sounding emotional. But, I knew he was kidding, I knew Papa too well. He had always talked about the white man’s land; where lights don’t go off; I knew Papa would not want to spend an extra night home, at least not now.

Before Papa travelled, he promised us a lot. He promised to come back after six months. He also said Mama would visit when he settles.

Papa's traveling bag took a position in the parlor for almost two weeks, just like I and Omasiri normally did.
Whenever 24th December was nearby, I and Omasiri would keep our big tattered lookingGhana-must-go bag in the parlor, and then gradually pack our clothes therein after laundry and ironing, in respect to Christmas travel.

Papa did almost the same thing. He always updated the bag daily; sandals today, shirt tomorrow, until he was done with everything he thought salient. This time Papa's bag was ECHOLAC, he refused managing any of his old bags. He said they were too old and outdated. Papa's new bag was also small.

 "I don't think I would need much for this journey, I can buy whatever I need in the U.K" he said as a defense.
At dawn, when Papa left finally for the Lagos, we were still on bed, Omasiri and me.



 To be continued...

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Comments

Unknown said…
No be small thing ooo...
valentineBiG said…
Hmmm datz a great suppense there o
valentineBiG said…
Dis story is like nigerian movie,WATCH OUT FOR PART TWO!!!!!!!
Unknown said…
Nigerian movie no b small valentine...........
Private User said…
Na pure Naija movie...
Private User said…
This kind story sef...
beautiful said…
See d story, dis is nollywood story.
chizoba Egboluche-mass comm said…
I cnt see any suspense here
beautiful said…
Dis is jst lyk d nollywood story.
beautiful said…
As usual part two will b out soon,
beautiful said…
We didn't even undastnd d intro and we r talkin of part two.
beautiful said…
Mister Best I no undastand dis style ohh.
beautiful said…
Mister Best I no understnd dis style oh..
beautiful said…
Pls we need a story wit no part two.
beautiful said…
Somtin real, so we don't hv to wait for d nxt release date.
beautiful said…
Pls if I may ask wen is d next release date?
beautiful said…
Cos I am ancioux to see it.
beautiful said…
I remain ur humble blogger beautiful...
Private User said…
What is the story trying to say?
Private User said…
It has no suspense, I can't identify any theme. The use of flashback...... Shambolic!
Private User said…
I see no suspense too. Don't mind Valentine BIG. He doesn't know what suspense is. He might have commented without reading #nooffense
EZE CHUKWUEBUKA said…
Mr best...u story makin brain
Demy psychology said…
its quite touching.
Demy psychology said…
i can d awrer of such nyts, evryone ancious for his coming bck n wt twil luk lyk.
Demy psychology said…
u must b a gud script writer, clear synopsis n gud lines n hrt beating suspense, write script mk we shoot movie g dis sch jawe. Ansuwood. Hahahahahaha
bobby ezubelu pol sci said…
mr best ur story is makin brain
Stanley Aniba=philosophy said…
What ar u trying 2 convey best huh
Stanley Aniba=philosophy said…
I don't seen 2 understand pls can someone explain it 2 me
beautiful said…
Though d story hv gud punch lines and nice arrangments like a professional.
beautiful said…
But my contention iis dat is too short.
beautiful said…
Demy I undastand how it feels wen a love one wanna make a long journey.
beautiful said…
It is not always easy sayin gudbye to d ones we love.
beautiful said…
Hv witnessd such b4 and its not alwys a wonderful moment.
beautiful said…
Mr. Best I feel u. Bt pls jst put d whole story in ur part two.
beautiful said…
I have said dat b4.
beautiful said…
If nah nollywood. U make a very big sell.
izuu masscomm said…
That comic relief for you it must not reach everybodys expectation
cydra mass com said…
I no even undastd dis story
cydra mass com said…
U 4 don rite de part 2 make we undstd beta
cydra mass com said…
E beta make u do de part 2 an action film
cydra mass com said…
Nd e go beta make jim iyke nd tonto dike follow 4 de part 2 so dat it will b more romantic
cydra mass com said…
Mr Best I de hail u joor!
Stevengold(C.M.S) said…
dis long story i cannot finish it can sm1 summarise it 4 me?
Mr. Gary philosophy said…
Indeed a great suspense my dear.
Mr. Gary philosophy said…
lol. dats 9ja 4 u
Mr. Gary philosophy said…
abi............
Mr. Gary philosophy said…
me2
Mr. Gary philosophy said…
yea it is nt.
Mr. Gary philosophy said…
Yea. Best. post the full Tory.
Mr. Gary philosophy said…
kip it up.
Mr. Gary philosophy said…
i remain my humble self.
Mr. Gary.
Mr. Gary philosophy said…
Philosophy dept. kwenu.
Izuu mass com said…
Hahahahahahahaha!! 9ja @ work o
crexyNora law said…
D story luks lyk a stragic story bt I hope its nt guy pls am waitin dnt keep me in suspence its just lyk purple Hibiscus wen u settle down n add more tinz 2 dis story I bet u would bcom a famous writer u would no longer have 2 use wole soyinka's 'english' 2 woo gals it would b ur own 'english'
Izuu mass com said…
Lol! E beta how u no finish am cos the part 2 no dey available
beautiful said…
Wowwww. Dis ur praises r too much nah.
beautiful said…
To me dis is a typical nollywood story.
beautiful said…
Mayb if he should sell it to our movie industry, he might make a fortune.
beautiful said…
So Nora all dis ur hailing is somhow.
beautiful said…
Though I am intrested in seein d end, bt nt lyk u.
beautiful said…
Mayb dey r still composin d part two
beautiful said…
Steven u no go skul?
beautiful said…
Or didn't u attend GSS101 class?
beautiful said…
Nawa for you ohhhhhhhhh.....
Kizzy Psych said…
Wat is touching der???
Kizzy psych said…
Yea gud write up bt as for d ansu wood its really not funny
Kizzy Psych said…
we can't comprehend ur comments typographical ererors too much der
Kizzy psych said…
Beautiful u must be a very stupid nd arrogant human being
Kizzy Psych said…
Steve its beta oo cuz part two no dey
Kizzy psych said…
Mr best i feel u
Kizzy Psych said…
So many talents u've got der man
Kizzy psych said…
U sing,u rap, u blog w at cnt u do???
Johnprecious said…
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